Feedback from my client (Music video draft one):

After publishing and exporting my first draft of my music video, i had received feedback after she'd watched the first draft of the video. She told my that during the second half of the video, there was a lack of events happening on screen. She mentioned how it kept cutting back and forth between the guitar playing and the race; and that there would be more footage needed in order to make the video more interesting.
So i looked back through the footage i did have, and looked for ways to feature them during this section of the video. I found a load of places that they could be featured and now there is more going on during the second half of the video.